i am totally flaking out. i had to catch up, in haiku. and not particularly strong or powerful haiku, either. just… rushed, keep-up-with-the-challenge haiku.
so here it is.
i should note that these are interconnected.
(for d.n.l.)
poem 7 – haiku
if prison’s a whale
and your cell, its belly, be
Jonah. wash ashore.
poem 8 – haiku
i know why you need
to circumvent Ninevah:
you’ll find mirrors there.
poem 9 – haiku
fear not reflection,
for in every flaw, there is
awe, grace, and power.
poem 10 – haiku
prisons are, themselves,
the criminals, molesting
all they claim to help.
poem 11- haiku
for the newly freed,
smog is as glorious as
tropics’ salted breeze.
One response to “NaPoWriMo: poems 7-11”
Haiku 10 & 11 are my favorites. I like your hand at haiku here. beautifully written & quite concise; each of them.